@TheCloserLook

Hey Guys,

This one was a massive creative experiment. I'm keen to know what you thought of it, and if there's anything I can do to refine this new style a bit more.

Also, feel free to join my discord where we talk about films, games, and creative writing. If you're a writer yourself you'll find a nice little community geared towards you there.

Here's the link: https://discord.com/invite/aJpYPQX

But thanks for watching, I'm going to crack on with my next video. If you paid attention to this one you'll know exactly what my next upload will be on.
- Henry

@ViolentOrchid

If my coworker talked to me about being socially awkward and then asked if I've ever been in love, I would hardcore think they were totally into me.

@pazz1239

Amateur bad writer:"Have you ever been in love?"

Legendary bad writer: "Anyway hows your sex life?"

@alaia-awakened

"It's true, I don't get out much socially. "
"What – not even a boyfriend?"
There. Dialogue fixed.

@fencserx9423

The fact that they didn’t even attempt the basic human exchange
“You’re very pretty”
“No I’m not”
“No really, Im sure if you styled your hair, a bit of makeup. You’d get a boyfriend no problem”
“You think?”
“Absolutely”
“So what about you? How’d you meet your boyfriend”
“Oh… um… No I don’t have one… well I did but… ”
“What? Who would break up with you?
“No. It wasn’t a breakup”
“…Oh my God im so sorry”
“No No don’t worry… it was a long time ago”

Like… that is NOT great dialogue. I wrote it in 5 minutes. But it’s at least a dialogue.

@AnnoyingMoose

"What about character motivation?"
"We'll fix it in post."

BEST  FILMMAKING  JOKE  EVER!!

@sageoz9886

The message that it's okay to have a love affair with a stranger's unconscious body is a phenomenally poor writing choice

@sno7599

"the most toxic moral ever" 13 reasons why peeking around the corner soflty whispering " hey psst if you kill yourself you get everything you ever wanted"

@juangabrielcabardo21

If you realize that the protagonist is using the body of her love interest for her own sexual and romantic desires without his consent, this turns from a superhero movie to a dark bleak horror real quick.

@bloodyneptune

She clearly had no idea how to portray someone accidentally turning themselves into a cat. Its definitely not like that, and I think a certain lawyer on Zoom can attest to that.

@swa7169

Biggest example of "unintentionally harmful" entertainment: Thirteen Reasons Why.  It's basically a suicidal teenagers fantasy of how things will play out after they kill themselves.

@ollliiver

I genuinely thought that the moral of this movie was to give up on your dreams

@chill_dude3295

1:18:00 To say “this is the kind of thing that you would expect to see written by like a fifteen year old” is an insult to fifteen year writers

@huntsman9316

Why was no one talking about how this poor random man’s life was taken from him by a ghost, and Diana was willing to make it permanent. She didn't have a second thought about it. They didn't even gloss over this.

@matthewchandra7072

when you pointed out Barbara saying "have you ever been in love" my head immediately jumped to "anyway how's your sex life" in The Room

@elipetrou9308

It’s so stupid that they didn’t consider that even one person might have wished for the world to end or something. As soon as the whole wish granting thing happened, it’s highly probable that the world would have just ended

@robofistsrevenge3288

This movie broke me mentally and emotionally. Not just because of all the reasons you mentioned here and more, but because the first Wonder Woman movie is arguably the most enjoyable and downright earnest superhero movie I had seen since Raimi's first Spidey film. It blew me away and immediately shot up to the top 5 of my all-time favorite superhero movies of all time. I felt inspired to be a better person after leaving the theater.

Then '84 happened and holy fuck.

@Tink00

Honestly that "have you ever been in love" moment could have been completely fixed if they'd just had an awkward pause. They run out of things to talk about, they both kinda glance around, then Barbara asks a question she thinks will kind of restart the conversation. Literally nothing in the script changes, and you add like 6 seconds to the runtime.

@badguybob1174

Me, a 15 year old writing fanfiction: yeah that's fair

@garf293

Ten year old Bruce Wayne in 1984.
"I can't believe I'm grounded...I wish I didn't have parents..."