@mr.indiankalakar

Character-1 female,3 male
Mood-positive
Theme- celebrating birthday party 
Story- Raman,18,is a student of dav public school, lucknow. his 19th birthday is coming and his annual exam has also been ended.this time he decided to celebrate his birthday at his home with his family, friends & relatives.he reached his home.on his birthday he expresses his desire to his mother.and tells her mother to cook delicious   food for his birthday party .he along with his siblings cleaned his home,decorated it and invited everyone.he also helped her mother to make food.in the evening he cuts the cake ,made by her mother.after that he served the food everyone and in last also takes it with her siblings and mother .they also do dance together.he praised her mother and thanked to her.the birthday party ended and everyone enjoyed it so much.

@hostelkaladka

Ok sir marked that. Next story will be better

@aniketverma2214

Thank you sir for the review 
Will work on that 
With this series I am feeling very confident

@tankadharbhaisal9172

Character -4
Sex- 1 Female,3 male
Age - 8 to 39
Mood - all positive 
Action - Dinner Time

Story:- Rahul is 21 years old and he's recently passed his B tech in chem engineering at Igit, Sarang. He came to home because of after finished his BTech. After a long time He's having his dinner with their brothers.His mother Making food along with that she's talking with Rahul. Rahul is sharing his college time with his mother .His brothers are busy to talk with eachother.

@mightymahi-cq7nw

Sir tanks for review  I correct my mistake

@Napoleon_bonaparte-b3t

Wo cycle wale picture m

@moderator3615

Sir vaise meine 8th class mein bht cylinder laye hai cycle  per

@Napoleon_bonaparte-b3t

Sir story likh ke kya fayda ....
Aapne review to ki hi nhi